msmoat.livejournal.com ([identity profile] msmoat.livejournal.com) wrote in [community profile] discoveredinalj 2006-11-05 09:53 pm (UTC)

It's hard not to repeat others' comments when "lovely" really suits! You have such a nice way with lyrical language and with images. Thank you! This was very nice. I really liked the atmosphere, moving from exhaustion through nighmare/memory-induced fear through the peace that they find together. Really, "lovely" captures it. *g*

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