ext_46100 ([identity profile] brenk.livejournal.com) wrote in [community profile] discoveredinalj2006-12-15 08:13 am
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First, huge thanks to [livejournal.com profile] byslantedlight and [livejournal.com profile] empty_mirrors for all the fun - and [livejournal.com profile] empty_mirrors gets another round of applause for doing the beta for 'So here it is'.

So, um, here it is:

A shortish slash story: "So here it is, Merry Christmas"

A little, more thoughtful thing: "No Candle"

Hope you enjoy :)

[identity profile] callistosh65.livejournal.com 2006-12-15 03:33 pm (UTC)(link)
Both of these were just wonderful. I loved, loved, loved the breathless pace to the dialogue in the first one. The most wonderful, snappy banter - and the references - The Sound of music, Slade, Gary Glitter. I loved the grumbling Doyle that you worte, he had me chuckling constantly!

And I'll echo what everyone says about No Candle. Wistful, melancholy, but that lovely note of hope and cheer, too. And all wonderfully understated in the brief exchange at the end.