Part 3...

[crimson-37.livejournal.com]

For those who'd like a warning. Slash lies beneath the cut.

Comments

[nakeisha.livejournal.com]

Very good.

*Hugs*

[myrebelcat.livejournal.com]

Well done!

I don't think Bodie's noticed, but Ray seems less than impressed about being interrupted. ;-) Although I'd be hard pressed to put my torch away after stumbling across a sight like that...

[doylebaby.livejournal.com]

This is really stunning, hon. The muscles, the skin, it's perfect!

[msmoat.livejournal.com]

Oh, and this is gorgeous! (And I need to write this very fast, given that I'm sneaking a look...oh, but how can I not, er, linger... *g*) I love the closeness here--oh, not just the obvious stuff, but the way Doyle is curled around Bodie, and Bodie is so relaxed with Doyle behind him... These are two men who are very, very comfortable with each other, you know? Just as it should be. Thank you!

[elizabethoshea.livejournal.com]

Beautiful and very powerful. I love the textures and the balance and the starkness of it.

[eveningblue.livejournal.com]

Wow, nice drawing!

I love that look on Doyle's face. Content but also protective. He may as well be purring.

[eldritchhobbit.livejournal.com]

Absolutely gorgeous! I love the lighting on Bodie's face and hair - perfect framing and lovely pose.

[crimson-37.livejournal.com]

Thank you, hon.

((hugs back))

[crimson-37.livejournal.com]

Thank you, and I know what you mean... lol

[crimson-37.livejournal.com]

Why thank you. :) *blushes*

[crimson-37.livejournal.com]

Oh you poor thing, not being able to linger...*g*

Yeah, just as it should be. I wanted that protective streak Ray has brought out as it tends to be a lot subtler than Bodie's usually.

These are two men who are very, very comfortable with each other

Oh yes, I like to think so. :)

[crimson-37.livejournal.com]

Thank you! What lovely feedback. :) I glad you like it.

[crimson-37.livejournal.com]

Sorry, I seem to have forgotten my manners.

Thank you for your lovely feedback. :)

[crimson-37.livejournal.com]

Why thank you!

That's what I was aiming for. If only pictures had sound, I think you'd hear him doing just that. :)

[crimson-37.livejournal.com]

Thank you very much. I'm glad you like it.

I love the lighting on Bodie's face and hair

I didn't want to take away the focus from Bodie too much because for this one there is more emphasis on Ray's emotions.

[probodie.livejournal.com]

yum YUM yum YUM yum YUM yum YUM yum YUM.

Nuff said *grins*

*hugs*

[enednoviel.livejournal.com]

Nice one, sweetie! :D

[blackmushroom.livejournal.com]

*blushing*
Wow! Good!
Shading, contrast is amazing. Very powerful.

[andreathelion.livejournal.com]

How am I supposed to work now ?? This is just....Awwhhhh. Fantastic, well done, thank you!

[byslantedlight.livejournal.com]

I so love this, Doyle being so possessive, them there in the dark... it's got a very haunting quality, you know? Thank you!

[crimson-37.livejournal.com]

I think you like this... lol ((hugs back))

[crimson-37.livejournal.com]

LOL... Ooh, care to write this story down for us? *cheeky grin* I do hope you recovered from your dithering. :) And thank you!

[crimson-37.livejournal.com]

Thank you, hon! :)

[crimson-37.livejournal.com]

Oh dear, I made you blush?

Thank you for the lovely feedback, honey! I'm glad you liked it. )

[crimson-37.livejournal.com]

Do you know what, don't work, just dream of B and D... It's more fun!

Thank you, honey!

[crimson-37.livejournal.com]

Yeah and protective of his man too. Haunting? Hmm.. I think it is. But in a way that it kind of sticks with you, that you don't really want to walk away kind of thing, maybe, I think...lol

Thak you honey!

[bistokidsfan77.livejournal.com]

I love your use of negative space to add definition. Beautiful!

[crimson-37.livejournal.com]

Why thank you!

[doylelover4-5.livejournal.com]

I think the look on Ray's face says, "I wish this could last forever."
Very nice indeed.

[izzie7.livejournal.com]

There's definitely a story crying to come out here - Bodie is so absorbed, but Doyle looks much more aware, both protective and possessive. Nice that you've given Bodie visible ribs - I always think of it only being Doyle whose ribs would show, but you've convinced me. Perhaps he's been pining?

Lovely work:)

[crimson-37.livejournal.com]

"I wish this could last forever."

I'm sure he is thinking it. :)

Thank you!

[crimson-37.livejournal.com]

There's definitely a story crying to come out here

Does one feel any inspiration then?

protective and possessive.

Oh yes, very much so. Nice to see Ray's protective streak, isn't it.

As for the ribs, maybe Ray stuck him on a healthy diet...lol

[paris7am.livejournal.com]

I'm speechless! All words fled brain, mouth hanging open.
Thank you.

[ancastar.livejournal.com]

Good lord. Is it hot in here or is it me? Marvelous. I love what you've done with the shadows.

[crimson-37.livejournal.com]

LOL... Thank you!

[crimson-37.livejournal.com]

LOL... Thank you for letting me know you liked it.