Entry tags:

Drabble Challenge - Hunger



Doyle's always considered the rumours about Bodie's appetites an exaggeration; the optimistic chatter of sex starved secretaries. But right now, here in Bodie's bed, watching Bodie take him into his mouth for the first time, Doyle knows it is all true. And when his hips jerk, thrusting him deep enough to feel the rub of a nose against his pubes and then Bodie swallows, Doyle groans an obscenity, closes his eyes, and converts to the creed of 'Insatiable Bodie'. Bugger the ability to eat three portions of toad-in-the-hole in the CI5 canteen, it's Bodie's capacity for a dick that's infinite.

[identity profile] myrebelcat.livejournal.com 2007-09-21 10:01 pm (UTC)(link)
They keep coming! I hardly finish reading one, and there's another! Bodie might be insatiable, but I'm absolutely wallowing in a richness of drabbles today.

Your last sentence made giggle. Thanks!

[identity profile] byslantedlight.livejournal.com 2007-09-21 10:07 pm (UTC)(link)
Hee! I knew you'd get infinite in there! *g* Very good!

[identity profile] sc-fossil.livejournal.com 2007-09-21 10:18 pm (UTC)(link)
Good doing, Doyle! He certainly figured out that Bodie's appetites are to be admired. Thanks!

[identity profile] heliophile-oxon.livejournal.com 2007-09-21 10:57 pm (UTC)(link)
My goodness, he's a lad of many talents isn't he! I expect he has just as much of an appetite for other activities too .... hope Ray doesn't have to spend any length of time sitting down tomorrow ....?

[identity profile] probodie.livejournal.com 2007-09-22 12:08 am (UTC)(link)
Bwahaha I loved this. Loved the reference to 'dick' despite the lack of 'spotted'. Brilliant.

[identity profile] callistosh65.livejournal.com 2007-09-22 07:23 am (UTC)(link)
LOL - hot and smutty, just how I like 'em. Your last sentence deserves to be stamped on a plaque somewhere in fandom..*g*

[identity profile] schnuffi.livejournal.com 2007-09-22 07:39 am (UTC)(link)
BWAHAHAHAHA!!! Perfect! Insatiable Bodie and his prey. He does love to stuff his face with "food", doesn't he? Love it!

[identity profile] bistokids.livejournal.com 2007-09-22 09:55 am (UTC)(link)
Ha - love it! So atmosepheric, and then so unexpectedly down to earth. And so right! Well done.

[identity profile] nakeisha.livejournal.com 2007-09-22 11:24 am (UTC)(link)
Cleverly done.

[identity profile] solosundance.livejournal.com 2007-09-22 11:30 am (UTC)(link)
cor blimey ... you make me incoherenter than ever .. smashing!

[identity profile] przed.livejournal.com 2007-09-22 04:09 pm (UTC)(link)
Love the thought of Bodie as a man of many appetites. *g*

[identity profile] crimson-37.livejournal.com 2007-09-22 10:05 pm (UTC)(link)
Looks like our Bodie is insatiable in all his appetites. Food... sex...

Thanks for sharing this with us. :)