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angel-ci5.livejournal.com ([identity profile] angel-ci5.livejournal.com) wrote in [community profile] discoveredinalj2007-09-22 12:11 pm
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The Sequel

I've attempted a sequel to my Fall Girl Drabble with the prompt "Truth".

Everything happens for a reason, my mum used to say.
Hell of a way to find out she was right.
If someone told me a few hours ago I'd be lying in Bodie's bed, his arms around me while he slept....well, I can't believe it.
Thought he'd never forgive me.
I was sure he blamed me. But he blamed himself.
Thought he wouldn't listen to me. But he listened intently.
I was afraid he wouldn't believe me, but he saw the truth.
When he reached out suddenly and kissed me so passionately, I knew it was the beginning of everything.

[identity profile] crimson-37.livejournal.com 2007-09-23 03:03 pm (UTC)(link)
See there's that Bodie passion that was lacking with Marika. And I loved that Bodie proved all of Doyle's assumptions about him wrong.
I really like this. It really defines the moment. I can imagine Doyle sighing and rubbing his cheek up against that broad chest and settling down to sleep now.

Thank you for this and thank you sharing it with us. :)