Drabble Challenge: Undone

[przed.livejournal.com]

One last one to end my night. byslantedlight, here's your buckle prompt.

Undone

He leans against the wall of his flat, wearing too tight jeans and a shirt open three buttons more than is decent. His thumbs are hooked in his belt and a satisfied smirk lurks at the corners of his mouth.

Am I going to let him get away with it, looking like a debauched angel? Fucked if I am.

I move close and closer still until there's only room for breath between us, breath and heat. Then I put my hand on his belt buckle and pull.

"What took you so long?" he asks.

A kiss is my only answer.

Comments

[callistosh65.livejournal.com]

Oooh, hot and sassy! Love the pull on the belt buckle, and the perfect answer, too.*g*

[przed.livejournal.com]

My intention was to go much hotter, but then I ran out of words. The disadvantage of the drabble.

[schnuffi.livejournal.com]

Woah, hot hot hot! Naughty you! So much passion and lust in such a few words. The image of Doyle leaning against the wall like this... *DROOL*

[przed.livejournal.com]

Doyle leaning against a wall always does it for me. *g*

[empty-mirrors.livejournal.com]

Oh yeah. :D

[przed.livejournal.com]

Heh.

[nakeisha.livejournal.com]

Aww. Lovely.

[przed.livejournal.com]

Thanks!

[heliophile-oxon.livejournal.com]

Mmm, he leans so well, doesn't he! Rrrrowr. Bodie really needs to take him in hand ...

[przed.livejournal.com]

He is an expert at the leaning.

Bodie really needs to take him in hand ...

As it were. Heh.

[myrebelcat.livejournal.com]

What took him so long, indeed! Terrific visual. :-)

[przed.livejournal.com]

Bodie can be a bit slow. *g*

[faramir-boromir.livejournal.com]

Best answer in the universe! *watches belt go flying* Thanks for this!

[przed.livejournal.com]

I wanted to do so much more with the smuttiness of this, but darn that hundred word limit. Might still do a full version of it once my hands heal up.

[crimson-37.livejournal.com]

Quite a frantic kiss at that. I'm sure. Ooh, very steamy stuff.

Thank you.

[przed.livejournal.com]

My initial plan was to go much steamier. But then I hit a hundred words. :-/

[crimson-37.livejournal.com]

Ah, now that's a shame. ;) If only someone would take up where this left off. :)

[sc-fossil.livejournal.com]

God, I love this. Sensual but hot, hot. The image I have now is very nice, thanks to you.

[przed.livejournal.com]

So glad to supply a nice image. *g*

[moth2fic.livejournal.com]

I'm so glad he wasn't going to let him get away with it!!

[przed.livejournal.com]

Absolutely not! *g* (Sorry for the incredibly late response. Just found this in my inbox.)

[magnifica7.livejournal.com]

Thank you so very kindly for sharing all those excellent drabbles! :)

[przed.livejournal.com]

You're welcome. (And now I'm remembering I wanted to turn this into a full blown smutty story some time. Hmmmm.)

[towerbridge2006.livejournal.com]

You've mastered the art of compact hotness!

Thanks for that.

[przed.livejournal.com]

It's like writing poetry. You've got to make every word count.

[towerbridge2006.livejournal.com]

That so true!