ext_7880 ([identity profile] kiwisue.livejournal.com) wrote in [community profile] discoveredinalj2007-09-23 12:33 am
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Drabble

It's only 8:30 pm in Pago Pago - heaps of time yet!


Bodie smiles and closes the door. Let Doyle have his fun, practice his Spanish with the haughty senorita. A lady like that eats men for breakfast, dinner and tea, tough CI5 agents no exception.

Bodie’s girls, whether they’re debs, schoolteachers or tarts, are more straightforward. He likes a nice shape, a cheerful (willing) disposition, no complications and a good time had by all.

After Anita’s done with him Doyle will return, rueful and heart-sore. And Bodie will sympathise, pour drinks down him, take him to bed and fuck the misery out of him.

Luckily Doyle falls in love a lot.

[identity profile] justacat.livejournal.com 2007-09-25 01:47 am (UTC)(link)
I am not much of a drabble fan - but I love this! I kept coming back to it! Now I want you to write the story that goes with it! *g*

It's like you say up there...sometimes they need to be beaten about the head a bit before they realize. I can read lots of scenarios, but my favorites are those in which they're getting it on (read: fucking *g*) very early, but the commitment, etc., don't come until later - takes them a while to see/accept/come to terms with that - admit it to themselves, whatever. *That's* the conflict I like to read, the issue I see - not them getting together, but them getting *together*.

(You know, I wish we'd had a chance to talk about Redemption at ZCon! Darn! I think you need to come through DC on your way home! *g*)

Anyway, very nice - and I like the title you chose, too...