ext_19925 ([identity profile] byslantedlight.livejournal.com) wrote in [community profile] discoveredinalj2006-12-22 12:22 am
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Prosfic - Perfect Alignment

At 0.22 GMT (the lads' time!) the northern hemisphere was tilted as far from the sun as it could be, and so the sun has now set in my tiny part of the Subarctic for 20 hours and 19 minutes straight. Also - it's snowing outside! So for this long, dark, cold night - Prosfic.

Perfect Alignment



Title: Perfect Alignment
Author: Slantedlight
Slash or Gen: Slash
Archive at ProsLib/Circuit/Hatstand: Certainly, if wanted!
Disclaimer: Bodie, Doyle and the CI5 universe do not belong to me, and I certainly don't make any money out of them. I'm just borrowing them to play. Good games.
Notes: Gorgeous graphic by [livejournal.com profile] empty_mirrors, and many thanks also to her for betaing and general hand-holding!
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[identity profile] blackmushroom.livejournal.com 2006-12-23 12:23 am (UTC)(link)
Wonderful story for a wonderful night. Winter solstice, cold, melancholic, lethargic, poetic... and so intense and full of life at the same time. Superb scenario. I love Ray’s thoughts and reactions and the way you let us discover the moment in their relationship. I’ve always imagined them getting together very soon: explosive sexual chemistry from the beginning. (I must confess feeling a bit upset at the beginning of your story: De Longford, the bad girl, member of the Animal Freedom Organization. But pleeeease we are good people! ;)
And yes! Bodie’s red toenails. Liked sex too, on such a cold night...
Thank you. Big warm hugs ;D

[identity profile] byslantedlight.livejournal.com 2006-12-23 12:55 am (UTC)(link)
Well De Longford wasn't really a bad girl, she didn't know what she was getting mixed up in - she was just silly enough that it looked bad for her! But ack! I forgot to google AFO! I've changed it to "Animal Equality Organisation" cos that one doesn't come up on google. Although that doesn't mean there isn't one, but I've done the best I can! It was so hard to come up with a name for Mullan's group that hadn't already actually been used as well... Mullan's group was the only one that was supposed to be bad, the others were just De Longford being rebellious, cos her father was a Minister in the government... *g*

I'm glad you liked it though, and thanks for the lovely feedback *g* *hugs* back to you!

[identity profile] blackmushroom.livejournal.com 2006-12-23 01:26 am (UTC)(link)
Please don't worry. Of course you did the best. I love the story.
And it's true: De Longford isn't "good enough" to be the bad girl *g*. I understand what you mean.
Hugs received and sent back to you again!
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