Prosfic - Perfect Alignment

[byslantedlight.livejournal.com]

At 0.22 GMT (the lads' time!) the northern hemisphere was tilted as far from the sun as it could be, and so the sun has now set in my tiny part of the Subarctic for 20 hours and 19 minutes straight. Also - it's snowing outside! So for this long, dark, cold night - Prosfic.

Perfect Alignment



Title: Perfect Alignment
Author: Slantedlight
Slash or Gen: Slash
Archive at ProsLib/Circuit/Hatstand: Certainly, if wanted!
Disclaimer: Bodie, Doyle and the CI5 universe do not belong to me, and I certainly don't make any money out of them. I'm just borrowing them to play. Good games.
Notes: Gorgeous graphic by empty_mirrors, and many thanks also to her for betaing and general hand-holding!

Comments

[myrebelcat.livejournal.com]

Very good games indeed! Just a lovely story. A good mix of case and character stuff.

I really liked the subtlety of the scene in the caravan where Ray is leaning against the wall, licking his lips and completely oblivious about all the signals he's sending to Bodie. There was a nice tension there between them, and a gradual revelation of what it was all about.

I don't think you really resolved things in the end with regards to their relationship, but considering this seems to be early in their partnership, I think that's just right.

And your writing was wonderfully evocative, as well. Thank you!

[byslantedlight.livejournal.com]

No, they really didn't resolve anything at the end, did they, except for admitting that they do well together... And fancy the skin off each other *g* I'd watched Old Dog around the time that I was figuring all this out, and they still seemed so prickly and one-upman-y and so on, so somewhere in my head I didn't think they'd really settled down to anything by then - although there just seemed to be something between them... So I had fun playing with the something!

And thank you!