http://macklingirl.livejournal.com/ ([identity profile] macklingirl.livejournal.com) wrote in [community profile] discoveredinalj2020-05-22 09:00 pm

Discovered in 30 Days and 30 Nights -May 22nd

Taking the next step
by Macklingirl


A month after telling Cowley they were lovers Bodie and Doyle came to a decision. They wanted to take the next step. But they had to plan it carefully.

"4.5 for Alpha one. 4.5 for Alpha one. Can we have an appointment, please? We have to talk to you."

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"Alpha one for 4.5. Meet me in twenty minutes. Alpha one out."
'I wonder what they want this time.'

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"Okay, Bodie. I think we should tell him straight away. He knows we love each other, so what should speak against a registered partnership?"

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"You two must be crazy! A registered partnership is like a marriage and even that I don't like to say it, we can't have a gay married couple in CI5."

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"I'm sorry to hear that, Sir. Then we have to resign. Sir."

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"You..WHAT? What do you mean, resign? Bodie, you can't..."

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Doyle thinking 'That's my Bodie.'

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"I have to call the Minister."

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Two days later they had a meeting with the Minister. The result wasn't what they all expected. But did they all expect this result? Look for yourself. *g*



"So, George. Your two best agents want to get married. With whom?"

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"They are sitting on my sofa. They want to marry each other."




"Haha, I like the idea."

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"You can't be serious. How would it look?"

"Ah, George. It would look as if CI5 is a organisation which wants to see its agents happy. And which wants to make sure that none of the other organisations would hire them."



Surprise didn't describe the lads feelings when they heard this. Even when Doyle had wished this to hear from the Minister.

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"You've spoken to Elizabeth, haven't you"

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"Well, of course, George. She's a very clever lady."

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Later that evening the lads were on stand by.

"I told you, Bodie, we could rely on Miss Walsh. Now you have to write the invitations."

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I hope you had fun with this piece. It's a little longer then planned, but I think that's not to bad. And if you would like to see the pictures in full size, please click on the one you want.


Titel: Taking the next step
Artist: Macklingirl
Proslib: If anybody wants ... yes
Disclaimer: As before, I have no rights, I play
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[identity profile] jat-sapphire.livejournal.com 2020-05-22 07:26 pm (UTC)(link)
Thank you! I love the combination of familiar pics and new storyline.

[identity profile] cim3745.livejournal.com 2020-05-22 07:35 pm (UTC)(link)
Great story *g* I had so much fun.

That's my Bodie and the laughing Minister are my favs.

Excellent choice of pictures, well done!

[identity profile] firlefanzine.livejournal.com 2020-05-22 07:49 pm (UTC)(link)
Hehe! That's a very nice development!
And I love the Minister. :-)

Your pictures are perfect!

...and of course it's not too long!

Thank you!

[identity profile] cloudless-9193.livejournal.com 2020-05-22 07:55 pm (UTC)(link)
It's very funny. Great choice of screencaps, too! :-)

[identity profile] ali15son.livejournal.com 2020-05-22 08:25 pm (UTC)(link)
Very nice.

Thankyou

[identity profile] shooting2kill.livejournal.com 2020-05-22 09:16 pm (UTC)(link)
So clever! Love the pictures, too (and the minister). Thanks a lot.

[identity profile] jinkyo.livejournal.com 2020-05-22 09:23 pm (UTC)(link)
Doyle thinking 'That's my Bodie.'
Eyelashes for days! Such lovely images and an absolutely charming story - thank you for this!!

[identity profile] neuromantique.livejournal.com 2020-05-22 09:27 pm (UTC)(link)
This is lovely!

[identity profile] paris7am.livejournal.com 2020-05-23 03:05 am (UTC)(link)
Really enjoyed this series - thank you! I hope you keep doing these.
In this episode, the fifth picture just about killed me - how can they both be so beautiful?!!

[identity profile] heliophile-oxon.livejournal.com 2020-05-23 08:14 am (UTC)(link)
Oh, well done! Works perfectly, you've done such a brilliant job of weaving the pictures into a whole (and what a good choice, with the Minister - as advised by Ms Walsh! *vbg*).
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[identity profile] snailbones.livejournal.com 2020-05-23 11:39 am (UTC)(link)


Great fun and so sweet too - thank you!

[identity profile] merentha13.livejournal.com 2020-05-23 05:23 pm (UTC)(link)
The whole story is wonderful! I love the screencaps you've chosen to go with it - they all fit perfectly. (The "thats my Bodie" one is my favorite!)
The sketch effect on the screencaps is very nicely done - it must have taken a while to do all of them!
I really enjoyed this. Thank you! :-)

[identity profile] ubicaritas9.livejournal.com 2020-05-23 07:14 pm (UTC)(link)
LOVE this whole series! Great choice of images, and you've made them looks so good.
Thanks for telling us your story. :)

[identity profile] sc-fossil.livejournal.com 2020-05-24 12:04 am (UTC)(link)
That was great! I love your story board. Thank you!
cyanne: (Pros Bodie & Doyle)

[personal profile] cyanne 2020-05-25 02:49 am (UTC)(link)
Yay again for Miss Walsh (I love her so much). And I love happy lads! This is such fun, thanks.

[identity profile] freetraveller15.livejournal.com 2020-05-25 03:06 pm (UTC)(link)
Very cleverly done! And nice of you to include the Minister... I've always liked him in the series!
😎😊