ext_42292 ([identity profile] myrebelcat.livejournal.com) wrote in [community profile] discoveredinalj2007-09-22 08:30 am
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I think I'm addicted to this drabbling thing!

Thank you to [livejournal.com profile] moth2fic for the prompts! I grabbed "journey" for this one and made it a title.

And I should say, I feel all naked and shocking, what with drabbling un-beta'd.



Journey


Partners. Stupid idea. Bodie eyes the skinny sod they’ve given him and figures he’ll put him in his place, fast.

Damn. Quick, isn’t he? But Bodie’s got him now. Snapped his head right back.

The bugger’s not going down. Enough! Finish this now, show Cowley he doesn’t need a partner... Oh sod it all!

Bodie only knows one way out of a choke hold, and he's not above breaking rules when he wants to win.

He taps out instead. The curly-haired copper is laughing, but Bodie doesn’t mind. His new partner wouldn’t be much use to him with broken fingers.

~end~

[identity profile] empty-mirrors.livejournal.com 2007-09-22 12:49 pm (UTC)(link)
LOL. I can things going down just like this. Thank you.

[identity profile] callistosh65.livejournal.com 2007-09-22 01:05 pm (UTC)(link)
Great 'first encounter' drabble. Can perfectly see Bodie changing his mind about the "skinny sod", just like this.

[identity profile] schnuffi.livejournal.com 2007-09-22 01:37 pm (UTC)(link)
LOL! Very nice that one. I guess Bodie will learn the lesson the hard way this time. That's one skinny sod he cannot beat up like that. What a wonderful base for a perfect relationship *G*

[identity profile] schnuffi.livejournal.com 2007-09-22 01:52 pm (UTC)(link)
Guess they will break even in the end. And I never said Bodie was slow or stupid - just a bit too sure of himself sometimes. But so is Doyle. Over time... hmmmm... *sees another bunny hopping in* As you said - you still have a whole day ahead of you *VEG*

[identity profile] schnuffi.livejournal.com 2007-09-22 02:18 pm (UTC)(link)
I'd say that bunny is overripe. You better do something about it before it explodes.

And you're right - some people might get a wrong impression of Bodie. Bad luck for them I say.

[identity profile] schnuffi.livejournal.com 2007-09-22 03:46 pm (UTC)(link)
YESSSS! *fists air*
ext_112784: (smiles itpi)

[identity profile] angel-ci5.livejournal.com 2007-09-22 01:58 pm (UTC)(link)
I love that Bodie taps, when he could have played dirty and got out of it. Very meaningful that, although Doyle doesn't realise of course! Great title too, thank you!

[identity profile] byslantedlight.livejournal.com 2007-09-22 02:51 pm (UTC)(link)
Addiction can be a very good thing... *g*

Only trouble was, I didn't get exactly what you meant by "taps out"! Is it a code to end the fight or summat?! (*is fick*)

[identity profile] nakeisha.livejournal.com 2007-09-22 03:51 pm (UTC)(link)
LOL.

Oh, yes. Spot on.

[identity profile] przed.livejournal.com 2007-09-22 04:26 pm (UTC)(link)
I've got a soft spot for hand to hand fighting, and this plays right into it. Silly Bodie, underestimating Doyle. But so glad he didn't resort to finger breaking. *g*

[identity profile] heliophile-oxon.livejournal.com 2007-09-22 04:41 pm (UTC)(link)
That last line says it all. The fact that Bodie taps out - to someone who only shortly before he had been dismissing as a lightweight - because he now knows this is "his new partner" is absolutely brilliant. Thank you!

[identity profile] sc-fossil.livejournal.com 2007-09-22 08:33 pm (UTC)(link)
Boys will be boys. Sounds like things just might work out. Thank you, Rebel.

[identity profile] crimson-37.livejournal.com 2007-09-23 03:20 pm (UTC)(link)
Oh a lovely little look into the beginning of something great. I could picture the whole thing, but that last line with Doyle laughing down at him - and in my imagination Bodie's face slowly breaking into a smile - was perfect.

Thank you for sharing this with us.

[identity profile] moth2fic.livejournal.com 2007-09-24 09:42 am (UTC)(link)
Lovely use of the prompt! I enjoyed that!