Four Things Bodie Forgot

[ancastar.livejournal.com]

I haven't read or commented yet on so many stories because I've been working frantically on my own (I'll get to it--I swear!).  Luckily, I finished in time.  

For your reading pleasure, I give you Four Things Bodie Forgot (and One He Didn't).  It's holiday tinged, yet covers a lot of ground overall.  My prompts were champagne and Christmas crackers.  I owe a huge debt of gratitude to callistosh65 and przed.  I hope you like it.

http://ancastascorner.com/fourthings.html

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Happy New Year, Everyone!

 

 

Comments

[windrain10.livejournal.com]

I liked this very much - I'm very interested in Bodie when he was young and I thought that the part of your story in which you addressed that, was very realistic. I certainly could "see" both boys in my mind. I also like the style you used, with discrete parts of his life highlighted in each section. Thanks for writing and posting this!

[ancastar.livejournal.com]

Oh, I'm glad young master William worked for you! *g* I didn't do a lot with adjectives when writing about him, but I really saw him (and Stevie) in my mind's eye.