Prosfic - Never The Words They Say

[byslantedlight.livejournal.com]

Well, happy Boxing Day - I hope everyone's full of goodness and glee after yesterday, and enjoying themselves still. Here's another story from me, should sorting out all that wrapping paper start to pall *g*

Never The Words They Say


Title: Never The Words They Say
Author: Slantedlight
Slash or Gen: Slash
Archive at ProsLib/Circuit/Hatstand: Certainly, if wanted!
Disclaimer: Bodie, Doyle and the CI5 universe do not belong to me, and I certainly don't make any money out of them. I'm just borrowing them to play with over the long cold winter...

Comments

[blackmushroom.livejournal.com]

What a wonderful story! I love this, beautiful, soooooo real.
I started reading as a "missing scene" story of a disturbing and very interesting episode: escape, fear, hesitation, nervous (sexual?) tension... Perfect. And then, very slowly, delicately, your story became so truthful, so right; a completely new universe.
Beautifully written. Many lovely moments, already commented. (*Doyle’s shout was a thing of beauty and a thing of danger* Oh please... these words are Poetry. I don't know why but this line is... is Ray Doyle!)
Thank you very much for this.

[byslantedlight.livejournal.com]

Thank you for telling me that you liked it! And I think that was how I saw it when I first started writing, as the missing scene, as what came next - because surely there would be something more than just getting up the next morning and going back to work as usual? And then, of course, the lads just took over... *g*