Ack! A typo! I read it over I don't know how many times, and one pops up right in the second sentance!
Thank you SO much for pointing that out. I've gone and fixed it. :-)
I don't seem to be much good at writing actual sequels to anything. This one started off life as a sequel to "Present Company" - my Halloween fic - and then any reference to the previous story just disappeared. But in my mind, that's what it is!
And thank you also for letting me know that you think the grammar worked (or at least was readable!). It was an experiment in language and I was very nervous about posting it. Slanted Light and Izzie were incredibly reassuring in that respect, but I still wasn't convinced it was really doable like this.
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Date: 2006-12-10 11:36 am (UTC)Thank you SO much for pointing that out. I've gone and fixed it. :-)
I don't seem to be much good at writing actual sequels to anything. This one started off life as a sequel to "Present Company" - my Halloween fic - and then any reference to the previous story just disappeared. But in my mind, that's what it is!
And thank you also for letting me know that you think the grammar worked (or at least was readable!). It was an experiment in language and I was very nervous about posting it. Slanted Light and Izzie were incredibly reassuring in that respect, but I still wasn't convinced it was really doable like this.
I'm glad it seems to have worked!