I agree with brenk up above that you captured that gleeful Bodie that we see so often in canon whenever Doyle turns out to be okay. A wonderful story, which I didn't even identify as h/c until someone mentioned it, because the hurt was very gritty and real and not drawn-out, and the comfort was not all goopy and ridiculous but very simple and again, what we see in canon (Bodie watching Doyle's apartment all night in "Hunter Hunted").
Also, I like the way you leave spaces in your story for the reader to fill in. In this case, those spaces come after the end. I love the way you hint at something happening but don't actually go that far. Very subtle. Nice stuff!
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Date: 2006-12-10 08:20 pm (UTC)Also, I like the way you leave spaces in your story for the reader to fill in. In this case, those spaces come after the end. I love the way you hint at something happening but don't actually go that far. Very subtle. Nice stuff!