That was a nice change of pace! Not a first time fic, or a happily ever after fic, but a messy break-up and back-together fic!
I love the massive miscommunication and the way they completely misinterpret what each other means...
“It’s you and me, all right? That’s it.”
Doyle folded his arms. “You want sex.”
And how Doyle doesn't even want to believe the next morning, and the revelation that Bodie had no idea the depth of Doyle's feelings for him, and the fact that each believed they'd seduced the other!
It was very funny, in a grim kind of way. And I'm so glad you got them to finally talk! That was an extremely satisfying story. Thank you!
(P.S. I was also highly amused by Bodie as terroist magnet... "Cowley should try sending him out with a bell around his neck and the squad behind him. They’d bloody clean up the continent." Hee!)
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Date: 2006-12-12 07:25 pm (UTC)I love the massive miscommunication and the way they completely misinterpret what each other means...
“It’s you and me, all right? That’s it.”
Doyle folded his arms. “You want sex.”
And how Doyle doesn't even want to believe the next morning, and the revelation that Bodie had no idea the depth of Doyle's feelings for him, and the fact that each believed they'd seduced the other!
It was very funny, in a grim kind of way. And I'm so glad you got them to finally talk! That was an extremely satisfying story. Thank you!
(P.S. I was also highly amused by Bodie as terroist magnet... "Cowley should try sending him out with a bell around his neck and the squad behind him. They’d bloody clean up the continent." Hee!)