Loved that! You actually managed to get them talking and still keep them in character. Kudos! Great banter and wonderful misunderstandings, all ending in happy leering. What better present could anyone have.
Fav bit was the water pistol. Don't ask me why, but that made my stomach lurch. The idea of Bodie desperately searching around for a present for Ray. That really hit me where I live.
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Date: 2006-12-12 11:22 pm (UTC)Fav bit was the water pistol. Don't ask me why, but that made my stomach lurch. The idea of Bodie desperately searching around for a present for Ray. That really hit me where I live.
Thank you for sharing. :D