Oh yay! I like the lines you added at the end. This is such a sweet story and a nice, comfortable universe to visit over the holidays. My fav bits?
"It's my handsome looks and the spectacular sex." (like many others!)
"Oh, your family's all right, Doyle. But I'm not sure about Cath's brother. Right mad bastard he is."
"That's only because I'm a handsome charming fella and you're an irritating bit of scruff."
"Ta very much," Doyle said, aiming a kick at Bodie's shin.
"But you're my irritating bit of scruff." Bodie stood and dropped a quick kiss on the top of Doyle's head before turning to the kitchen counter. "Now, where's my tea?"
As Doyle watched, the blood drained from Bodie's face and he took on his best gobsmacked guppy look.
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Date: 2006-12-18 12:15 am (UTC)"It's my handsome looks and the spectacular sex." (like many others!)
"Oh, your family's all right, Doyle. But I'm not sure about Cath's brother. Right mad bastard he is."
"That's only because I'm a handsome charming fella and you're an irritating bit of scruff."
"Ta very much," Doyle said, aiming a kick at Bodie's shin.
"But you're my irritating bit of scruff." Bodie stood and dropped a quick kiss on the top of Doyle's head before turning to the kitchen counter. "Now, where's my tea?"
As Doyle watched, the blood drained from Bodie's face and he took on his best gobsmacked guppy look.
Great fun! Please have the happiest of birthdays.