Wonderful! I was on the edge of my seat throughout most of this fic - you really captured the tension of the moment. Doyle being chased through the cold and Bodie trying to find him in time... And I know you labeled this as gen, but it felt like pre-slash to me.
What's that chat Doyle was planning on having with Bodie? What about the fact that Bodie couldn't concentrate on anything except Doyle? I want to read the bit that's obviously got to follow this one, too!
I think my favorite part was this: They've found the plane; it landed in a field just here," a single finger pointed at the precise location they had just identified, "together with two bodies. Both appear to have survived the crash, as they were some distance from the plane, only to have been shot.
Even though I knew perfectly well that you weren't going to kill Doyle, it was still a moment's worry until I got to the line about the diplomatic badges and breathed a sigh of relief, just like Bodie.
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Date: 2006-12-18 11:59 am (UTC)What's that chat Doyle was planning on having with Bodie? What about the fact that Bodie couldn't concentrate on anything except Doyle? I want to read the bit that's obviously got to follow this one, too!
I think my favorite part was this: They've found the plane; it landed in a field just here," a single finger pointed at the precise location they had just identified, "together with two bodies. Both appear to have survived the crash, as they were some distance from the plane, only to have been shot.
Even though I knew perfectly well that you weren't going to kill Doyle, it was still a moment's worry until I got to the line about the diplomatic badges and breathed a sigh of relief, just like Bodie.
Thank you!