Ahh, lovely--as always! That is an excellent use of Marge and, especially, that scene on the rooftop. Wonderful stuff. And I really enjoyed Bodie's pov here, and the way he protects Doyle, and gathers his courage, and then ends the game. Because he's serious, and Doyle needs to know that, and...ooh, it's just lovely. *g*
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Date: 2009-12-18 10:56 pm (UTC)Thank you!