Oh, I love stories of their early days together! I liked the way you developed the supporting characters and established the mood and place. I also really appreciate the way you let me, the reader, discover the main conflict--that B & D have been intimate and that's why Doyle is looking for a reteam--as opposed to telling me so at the onset. I thought this was wonderful, like all your stories. I quite enjoyed my pressie. :-)
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Date: 2006-12-22 06:44 pm (UTC)