Oh this was so lovely ... you brought such atmosphere and feeling to your tale. I enjoyed it very much. Much as I love Bodie I find it hard to write him as a romantic (although I think he is) and this was perfect in that respect, and you really encapsulated (omg that's a big word for xmas eve) why Ray loves him. Yup, there was real magic in here .. Thank you!
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Date: 2006-12-28 06:48 pm (UTC)