I wanted to post my comments a couple of hours ago when I'd just finished your story and everything I felt about it was still fresh in my mind but, surprise, surprise, livejournal was down yet again. Anyway, I was very impressed with this: it was involving, intriguing, very different and I got so caught up with it I kept darting around checking out dates etc! And, despite the complicated logistics of the whole idea, you still managed to keep their blossoming relationship sweet, gentle and very endearing. I really enjoyed this a lot, so thank you for all your hard work!
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Date: 2011-12-02 09:09 pm (UTC)