Just as good as the first time I eyed it! Lovely inner dialogue that captures Bodie so well! You build the suspense, the conflicted feelings he has - then have Doyle trips in & give him everything he ever wanted. Bodie must have been a *very* good boy this year :D Well done, and off to read part two.
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Date: 2007-01-02 04:34 am (UTC)