Oh this was fab - I loved Ray's resolution, and how it was so not working, and how we found that out gradually, falling deeper and deeper into it with Doyle. Great to see Bodie's irresistability through what happens to Doyle too - to see that there's absolutely nothing he can do to keep himself away really... And as someone else said - very hot, right from the first despite the no-graphics!
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Date: 2007-01-04 11:11 pm (UTC)