Marvelous! I really enjoyed the structure of the story - I was smiling by the time I got to the third day and Doyle's waking up in bed with Bodie *again*. I also particularly liked the revelation that they both had opposing resolutions, made for not dissimilar reasons. And that Bodie was deliberately sabotaging Doyle! Not that he ever had much of a chance of succeeding at that particular resolution...
Your Bodie was incredibly likable, and Doyle was very funny. Thank you!
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Date: 2007-01-22 07:28 pm (UTC)Your Bodie was incredibly likable, and Doyle was very funny. Thank you!
(And, uh, apologies for the very late feedback.)