This was *so* visual - it felt like I was watching and I learnt so much about them and their lives even though the scene was deceptively simple. I liked Doyle wondering about a nine to five job when he caught sight of the flipchart, and Bodie not being able to kiss him because of the "hands off at work" rule. You beautifully conveyed how hard and how wonderful their relationship is. Thank you!
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Date: 2007-01-07 02:38 pm (UTC)