To be honest, Ann's portion started out much snarkier than the way it ended up. I had her being all kinds of awful - but then I thought that Ray's judgment couldn't be *that* bad, so I softened her up a bit.
Still, she's no competition for a Bodie protecting what's his ;).
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Date: 2007-03-28 03:58 am (UTC)Still, she's no competition for a Bodie protecting what's his ;).
Thank you - I'm so glad you liked it!
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