Bodie doesn't say those words. He doesn't beg. He doesn't think it would do any good. And he doesn't want the burden to be on Doyle.
So he puts it on himself instead.
Just a perfect little encapsulation of the two of them. I loved the rhythm of this. It was very intimate and quiet. Bodie had almost given up, hadn't he? That's why he could say the things he said. And I loved the idea of him edging towards hysteria *g* I don't know why but that really appeals to me :-) So glad they were saved though! I was feeling a bit stressed but you've calmed me down, so thank you!
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Date: 2007-04-09 09:45 am (UTC)Bodie doesn't say those words. He doesn't beg. He doesn't think it would do any good. And he doesn't want the burden to be on Doyle.
So he puts it on himself instead.
Just a perfect little encapsulation of the two of them. I loved the rhythm of this. It was very intimate and quiet. Bodie had almost given up, hadn't he? That's why he could say the things he said. And I loved the idea of him edging towards hysteria *g* I don't know why but that really appeals to me :-) So glad they were saved though! I was feeling a bit stressed but you've calmed me down, so thank you!