The call for a sequel gets another hands-up from this corner. Doyle's usually pretty calculating, and though he whispers to Andy to convince her, I'm wondering how much of an idea about Bodie's tendencies he had to use long before the evening got rolling. Suspecting your partner's a voyeur and actually doing anything about it are different, so maybe Bodie's done something that gave Doyle the germ of an idea.
Your details are visually enthralling. I felt as though I were watching the whole thing before me. Well done!
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Date: 2007-06-14 05:39 am (UTC)Your details are visually enthralling. I felt as though I were watching the whole thing before me. Well done!