Nope. The voice is dead on. She's all into curls, ripped jeans, and has fall-back plans in case the first one doesn't work out (Doyle, then Bodie, then Simon, then...). Contingency upon contingency at that age, still feeling for freedom. Really liked the way you used her to show them in action--nicely done, P!
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Date: 2007-06-14 05:08 am (UTC)