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This was brilliant! Well done you, what a fantastic first time story. I also liked the symmetry of the beginning and ending, and your words just flowed, think you got under the characters very well. My fave line was suddenly full of the warm, beautiful knowledge that Ray trusted him to find his way across unknown ground, to know where Ray was and meet him there. I thought that was lovely *g* Thank you!