Oh, very nice! I like this uncertain, scared Doyle who, naturally, turns nasty with it. *g* But does try to fix what he's broken. And Bodie sticking through it all, because he can't help himself, but finally needing to do some expressing himself.
A bit not mentioned by anyone else so far, that I loved, was when Bodie came back to find Doyle trying to leave the flat to find him. This bit: Bodie bit his lip. So fierce, Doyle, in all ways. In declaration, in defeat, in recovery. And in apology, which Bodie knew this was. And the head press and the "Yeah, sod 'em". *happy sigh*
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Date: 2006-11-05 01:57 pm (UTC)A bit not mentioned by anyone else so far, that I loved, was when Bodie came back to find Doyle trying to leave the flat to find him. This bit: Bodie bit his lip. So fierce, Doyle, in all ways. In declaration, in defeat, in recovery. And in apology, which Bodie knew this was. And the head press and the "Yeah, sod 'em". *happy sigh*
Thank you!