Thank you! I had so much fun writing this story that I'm actually very tempted now to turn the whole scenario around and have Doyle be the one who gets his drink spiked in the bar. I've been wondering how noble Bodie might or might not be. Or even earlier - how differently the whole bar scene might play out. And of course Doyle's experience would be completely different.
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Date: 2007-10-22 01:59 am (UTC)I'm so glad you enjoyed my story!