Well, to state the bleedin' obvious, this was very, very funny! So many great lines - I knew we were going to have a great time right from the word 'go':
Doyle couldn’t help it, he turned his head and raised his voice.
“Bodie! It’s for you.”
And, as Steve Martin once said, the secret of comedy is in the timING and yours was spot on:
A shriek rent the air. Muffled, but still a shriek. Doyle locked gazes with his partner. “That’s the old bat in 22,” said Bodie with scarcely a twitch. “So..,” began Doyle, “that means…” “…that the tablets…” “…have worn off.”
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Date: 2007-10-19 01:56 pm (UTC)Doyle couldn’t help it, he turned his head and raised his voice.
“Bodie! It’s for you.”
And, as Steve Martin once said, the secret of comedy is in the timING and yours was spot on:
A shriek rent the air.
Muffled, but still a shriek.
Doyle locked gazes with his partner.
“That’s the old bat in 22,” said Bodie with scarcely a twitch.
“So..,” began Doyle, “that means…”
“…that the tablets…”
“…have worn off.”
You're a natural!
Many thanks for this.