Date: 2006-11-05 10:19 am (UTC)
Great pacing, tension, excitement, the whole thing fairly ripped along. I really 'heard' MS's Doyle in this, the internal dialogue on the tube, the terse, gruff concern with Bodie around the bomb exploding. And a doozy of a last line, too!

Terrific read. Thanks for sharing this.
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