That was a fab read. It was funny, hot, sexy, emotional and intense and it had a happy end. Just perfect. And you're absolutely great at sex banter. My fav line is:
“Well, just look at your prick.”
“Which one?” And at that he did look at Doyle, who grinned back at him.
Had to laugh so damn hard at this.
But despite all the fun and lust you managed to get the insecurity and fear in too. And found a way to bring them together as it should be. That embrace at the end sums up what they are to each other.
And now excuse me while I take a shower. A cold one. }-)>
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Date: 2007-11-07 10:45 am (UTC)“Well, just look at your prick.”
“Which one?” And at that he did look at Doyle, who grinned back at him.
Had to laugh so damn hard at this.
But despite all the fun and lust you managed to get the insecurity and fear in too. And found a way to bring them together as it should be. That embrace at the end sums up what they are to each other.
And now excuse me while I take a shower. A cold one. }-)>