Very well written, I enjoyed that. I love how you captured that habit of Bodie's (when he feels vunerable) of just giving a pat to Doyle without saying anything then escaping, only in this instance to get as far as the window. It may seem a small detail, but it's just so like Bodie to do that.
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Date: 2007-11-07 09:09 pm (UTC)