What a wonderful story! I loved the way you paint Doyle and Bodie by giving us little details--the address book, the way Bodie folds his clothes--that tell so much. I love stories in which they're already Doing It and are now trying to figure out stuff about their relationship. Doyle the one being more in emotional control also seems right. And also, the hot sex!
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Date: 2006-12-02 12:46 am (UTC)Great stuff!