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Yep, it's me again, nipping in just under the deadline for my day.


This story follows on from Numberless Dreams.


The Best Laid Plans





Title: The Best Laid Plans.
Author: Draycevixen
Slash or Gen: Slash
Archive at ProsLib/Circuit: Yes.
Disclaimer: Still. Not. Mine.





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Date: 2008-12-23 12:22 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] heliophile-oxon.livejournal.com
AAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAGH!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! NOOOOOOO don't leave them like this ::sobs:: draycefixitan'makeitallbetter, pleeeease!?!?!?!?

Date: 2008-12-23 12:28 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] greengerbil.livejournal.com
Ditto!

PUH-LEEEEEZE....

Nice drayce? Drayce fix, huh? Pretty please?

Date: 2008-12-23 12:39 am (UTC)
ext_9226: (xmas2 - snailbones)
From: [identity profile] snailbones.livejournal.com


Nooooooooooo! You can't have left it there. Has a bit dropped off?

::peers under lappy::

::shakes lappy::

You wouldn't, would you? You're a sweet kind nice soul... I've got mince pies, cookies, bad sherry, what'll it take, huh? ::flutters eyelashes::

Date: 2008-12-23 12:49 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] norfolkdumpling.livejournal.com
Bodie you bloody idiot - get back in that room RIGHT NOW!!!

Splendid and tricksy follow-up though this is, I am not going to beg you for a sequel to put it all right. Because I know that you wouldn't be so cruel as to leave them and us hanging like this. And I'm talking to Miss Drayce here, so the Vixen can just go wash her hair for a few minutes or something. Look at my face. Do you want to see me cry? Didn't think so. *eg*

trap you in the chimney nook, screaming for your virtue like some Victorian virgin

I'm going to bed now so if you need this image I'm afraid it'll be with me for the next few hours. I'll return it tomorrow, scrubbed and shiny, I promise.

Thanks for chucking in a curveball with this - always good to have the old expectations given a rattle ♥

Date: 2008-12-23 01:41 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] kiwisue.livejournal.com
You Rotter! *g*

Thankfully I have a vivid imagination. Debbie sends him packing, he goes home, Doyle knocks him flat and then...

Date: 2008-12-23 01:45 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] siskiou.livejournal.com
Well, that's not nice!
Poor lads! You've got to make it right for them (and us)! Please?

Date: 2008-12-23 05:30 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] erushi.livejournal.com
Ack, ack! Oh, you nasty thing, you. I demand Part III! Do I have to bribe you? Just name your price! Though sending you the lads is out, because something tells me you'll enjoy yourself too much and forget to write it...

Though there is something appealing to be said about open-ended, possibly painful endings... *embraces her inner masochist*

Otherwise, loved Bodie being all think-y, and Doyle being all think-y too, and things backfiring. Also loved the humour which, as always, is one of the hallmarks of your work. Anson at the beginning, Doyle's "it's twue, it's twue"... and "trap you in the chimney nook, screaming for your virtue like some Victorian virgin" is priceless, positively priceless. And the last bit of dialogue had me holding my breath, so I forgive you for the open ending after all. *g*

Date: 2008-12-23 06:07 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] schnuffi.livejournal.com
WTF??? Excuse me for a second while I kill the bloody stupid oaf. What the hell does he think he's doing? He has no clue what Doyle and Cowley were talking about but of course Mr. Master Mind draws his own conclusions and now he hurt Doyle *ROAAAAARS*

Ok, missy - you better write another one and make for a happy ending. Otherwise I'll be forced to send not only the owls after you but the zombie bunnies as well. And the beavers!

Date: 2008-12-23 07:17 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] m31andy.livejournal.com
Evil, Drayce. I sincerely you're intent on fixing this???

(What am I saying? There's room for some serious angst before you fix it - carry on dear, I'm enjoying the ride!!!)

Lovely as always!

Date: 2008-12-23 08:56 am (UTC)
ext_112784: (look)
From: [identity profile] angel-ci5.livejournal.com
Hee, I like this ending! *ducks missiles headed this way*
And we know they'll sort it all out in the end, right! *g*

Thank you for two wonderful posts today (yesterday?), you've utterly spoilt us!

Date: 2008-12-23 11:42 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] sc-fossil.livejournal.com
Bodie is a moron. To quote Doyle.

Thanks for the story, but not for the idea that now I have to go to work with poor Bodie getting what he deserves: nothing.

Part three..?

Date: 2008-12-23 01:03 pm (UTC)
ext_137604: (bodie pop1)
From: [identity profile] smirra.livejournal.com
I'm really impressed, that you will be able to even write a third if not actually part 4, 5, 6, in such a short time and post them here! *g*

Date: 2008-12-23 01:25 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] msmoat.livejournal.com
You're not meant to be cruelly teasing at Christmas, you know. I'm sure it's in the rules somewhere. I hope you like coal! *g* But, yes, this was very nice--massive disagreement just before Christmas and five days off. So--ahem--what happens next, then?

Date: 2008-12-23 03:30 pm (UTC)
ext_9226: (xmas1 - snailbones)
From: [identity profile] snailbones.livejournal.com


Somehow I just knew the bad sherry would be the way to your heart *hg* ::flutters eyelashes some more::

Date: 2008-12-23 03:37 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] schnuffi.livejournal.com
Ok, you better make it a good one. And forget about the animals - how about sending a rather pissed-off Doyle after you instead? He already asked for spare ammo, explosives and on the way out he grabbed the mega spork too. Looks like you and Bodie are in big trouble *listens to car screeching out of driveway*

Date: 2008-12-23 03:44 pm (UTC)
ext_9226: (snailmoving - one of those days)
From: [identity profile] snailbones.livejournal.com


S'true! ::gargles:: *g*

Date: 2008-12-23 03:51 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] schnuffi.livejournal.com
Weeeell, he did say something about burning that witch on a stake and I don't think he was talking about Bodie... Besides I still have the super duper hyper mega spork of doom and you definitely don't want me coming after you with this baby.

Oi, it's Christmas so you better have them end up in bed together, happy as pigs in the mud. Or, if you prefer, them in the mud together with the pigs but still happily together.

Date: 2008-12-23 04:01 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] schnuffi.livejournal.com
Who says I'm going for your knickers? *EG* Maybe I can zigzag your brain back into the right direction...

Date: 2008-12-23 04:39 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] callistosh65.livejournal.com
Oh Bodie love, what are you doing? I enjoy Bodie getting the wrong end of the stick and depserately covering when it's written as Bodie-like as this. Just want to grab him lovingly by the ear and nudge him into Doyle..*g*
Thank you!

Date: 2008-12-23 09:31 pm (UTC)
ext_137604: (Default)
From: [identity profile] smirra.livejournal.com
Yay! I like a slow realistic progress in a story.

Date: 2008-12-24 03:41 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] andreathelion.livejournal.com
....sometimes it's nice to catch up late *whistles* ....

nonetheless and just because *kicks Bodie in the back* and *bearhugs drayce*

.... off to part three ...

Date: 2008-12-24 05:27 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] m31andy.livejournal.com
Well, happy endings are not really my forte, but I do like reading them... What can I say? The Evil Twin is obviously a bad influence on me.

*is now off to read the next part*

Date: 2008-12-27 02:28 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] przed.livejournal.com
Oh dear. Now I definitely want to shake Bodie. Click the next link and keeping fingers crossed it all ends well...

Bit more catching up (go me!)

Date: 2009-01-25 02:09 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] saintvic.livejournal.com
*kicks Bodie*

He really is his own worst enemy isn't he, jumping to conclusions without any proof and stomping over his chances.

*kicks hhim again for good measure* (although I hope he forgives me for that)

Again I enjoyed this especially as it really ups the angst quotient for us readers. And I do like some angst before a happy ending and I am going to hope that when I get caught up everywhere a happy ending will appear *looks hopeful*.

Thank you again ♥

Date: 2009-10-15 04:46 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] mysteriousaliwz.livejournal.com
Gah!
*thwacks Bodie round the head for jumping to conclusions*

*scurries off to next chapter to see what happens next*

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