Oh wow, I have finally got to read this at last. And I love it.
I love the way you have our lads escaping from a CI5 that they no longer have faith in, and the way you keep to the fact that these are highly trained agents who have that training engrained into them. Not allowing them to relax 100% knowing they were up against Cowley, and therefore needing to remain on their guard.
I love the way you, bring them together. It was done so naturally and that I love. Ray stadling Bodie's thighs while shaving him. *mmm..* I can see Bodie's soft eyes watching the gentle concentration on the beguilig face. And then to have Bodie... Bodie stopped him with a hand to his waist. Bodie’d never put a hand on his waist before *sighs* And it would stop him, feeling the strength in that large hand as it lays surprisingly gentle and far more intimatly against his side, than any touch he has received throughout their partnership. I can feel the electricity running through and between them as he freezes and their eyes are locked, in a look that neither would be able to pull away from even if they had wanted to. And then the kiss. Perfect! So bleeding perfect, I nearly cried.
And I loved your OCs, they really brought that little village alive.
You know I love the way you write these two anyway, but dear, you have surpassed yourself once again.
And I thank you.
Like the others I call for an encore. I mean really, you don't expect us to let you stop there, do you? ;)Not when there is so much more of this universe to explore.
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Date: 2006-12-27 10:32 am (UTC)I love the way you have our lads escaping from a CI5 that they no longer have faith in, and the way you keep to the fact that these are highly trained agents who have that training engrained into them. Not allowing them to relax 100% knowing they were up against Cowley, and therefore needing to remain on their guard.
I love the way you, bring them together. It was done so naturally and that I love. Ray stadling Bodie's thighs while shaving him. *mmm..* I can see Bodie's soft eyes watching the gentle concentration on the beguilig face.
And then to have Bodie...
Bodie stopped him with a hand to his waist. Bodie’d never put a hand on his waist before
*sighs*
And it would stop him, feeling the strength in that large hand as it lays surprisingly gentle and far more intimatly against his side, than any touch he has received throughout their partnership. I can feel the electricity running through and between them as he freezes and their eyes are locked, in a look that neither would be able to pull away from even if they had wanted to. And then the kiss.
Perfect! So bleeding perfect, I nearly cried.
And I loved your OCs, they really brought that little village alive.
You know I love the way you write these two anyway, but dear, you have surpassed yourself once again.
And I thank you.
Like the others I call for an encore. I mean really, you don't expect us to let you stop there, do you? ;)Not when there is so much more of this universe to explore.
Thanks so much for sharing this with us, honey!