Date: 2007-01-22 03:43 pm (UTC)
Late feedback! :-)

I just wanted to say that this line made me laugh out loud...

"Except this time its boy meets boy, boy doesn’t realise he has fallen in love with boy, boy mphmmmmmmmm…"

Very like Bodie - when he gets flustered he starts talking too much. And I love the fact that even in his internal dialog he's the same. I also enjoyed the brief glimpse of Doyle's family life.
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