Heart

Mar. 11th, 2012 07:31 pm
[identity profile] hagsrus.livejournal.com posting in [community profile] discoveredinalj
Shots exploded and Rahad's fleeing car clipped Bodie. He fell, momentarily stunned and winded. Heard Doyle's panicked shout.

Here was Doyle, rolling him onto his back, seeking his heart.

He wrapped his arms around Doyle, pulling him down into a desperate embrace. "Never knew you cared."

"Of course I bloody care!" Doyle snarled and crushed an angry kiss onto Bodie's mouth.


Bodie forced a laugh. "Never knew you cared."

And they joked about blanks in Doyle's gun.

Later, in the moments before his solitary sleep, Doyle whispered, "Of course I care," and longed to feel again that safely beating heart.

Date: 2012-03-12 12:10 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] margaret-r.livejournal.com
That's so sad, it makes you hope they find each other. Beautifully written:)

Date: 2012-03-12 01:35 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] sc-fossil.livejournal.com
I like how you gave us a little bit of what Doyle had really wanted to do when he found Bodie alive. Nice job here!
Edited Date: 2012-03-12 01:36 am (UTC)

Date: 2012-03-12 03:11 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] lillianorchid.livejournal.com
Ah, exactly what Doyle really wanted to do in Untouchables. :) Love it!

Date: 2012-03-12 07:40 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] byslantedlight.livejournal.com
Ah - very nice! Thank you!

Date: 2012-03-12 07:47 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] solosundance.livejournal.com
Oh, boys.


Date: 2012-03-12 08:49 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] shooting2kill.livejournal.com
More beautiful poetry Lovely..

Date: 2012-03-12 01:48 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] probodie.livejournal.com
Oh beautiful imagery - thanks for sharing.

Date: 2012-03-12 01:57 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] kiwisue.livejournal.com
*Meep* All that wanting...

Date: 2012-03-12 05:02 pm (UTC)
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From: [identity profile] snailbones.livejournal.com


Awww, that's so sad, but in a good way, thank you!

Date: 2012-03-12 05:25 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] callistosh65.livejournal.com
Fabulous. So much told in so few words.

Date: 2012-03-12 06:39 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] heliophile-oxon.livejournal.com
So that's what Bodie wanted to happen/imagined happening ...

It's moving and sad, bit if they both silently, secretly want the same thing they're bound to let it slip sooner or later!

Date: 2012-03-12 06:40 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] heliophile-oxon.livejournal.com
BUT. Not "bit". Dammit.

Date: 2012-03-12 08:35 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] lillianorchid.livejournal.com
You're Welcome! :D

Date: 2012-03-14 12:05 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] merentha13.livejournal.com
Nicely done. Poor Doyle....

Date: 2012-03-27 09:51 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] moonlightmead.livejournal.com
Oh no, for both of them! This is lovely.

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