Things were proceeding in a predictable manner, when suddenly there was a renewed commotion from the far end of the room.
"He's alive!" screamed a woman.
Doyle and Bodie rushed forward just in time to see the groom sit up. It might have been a relief except his expression was disturbing blank, his head was canted to one side, and he was drooling.
Ignoring the doctor's attempts to make his lie back down, the groom stood.
"What's he doing?" asked Bodie, baffled.
"He's...," Doyle stared. "He's..."
"What!"
"He's getting naked!"
So far I've been trying to be good, and go with the overall theme and atmosphere established in the beginning. I'll only resort to this if I get desperate. ;-)
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Date: 2007-01-23 11:46 am (UTC)So far I've been trying to be good, and go with the overall theme and atmosphere established in the beginning. I'll only resort to this if I get desperate. ;-)