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Happy holidays, everyone! Hope you enjoy the story.



The storm struck without warning, whipping through the city with frightening intensity and bringing traffic to a crawl. Within an hour, lazy flakes replaced the storm’s wrath. By midnight, snow had turned to freezing rain, leaving trees glazed with ice, their branches bent beneath the unaccustomed weight. The smaller ones drooped almost to the ground, seemingly as dejected as the final few pedestrians who were making their slow way home – including two disgruntled CI5 operatives who had taken a sharp look at road conditions and wisely decided to hoof it.

“My place is closer,” Bodie grumbled, stuffing his hands deeper into his jacket pockets. The temperature had dropped considerably in the last hour, and what had seemed good enough for a quick surveillance job was now painfully inadequate.

“The heater works better in mine,” Doyle countered, pulling his woollen cap a little lower on his ears.

“I’ve got food in.”

“So have I.”

“I mean real food, Ray. Not that vapid rabbit chow you like. Leftover Vindaloo that I can pop in the oven. A bit of rice and some veggies, a glass of wine, et voilà! A meal fit for a king.”

“But is it enough for two kings?” Doyle asked, rightfully suspicious of his partner’s largesse. The last time Bodie had offered him a meal, he had ended up with one banger and a single runny egg – not a feast by any stretch of the imagination.

Before Bodie could reply, a sudden cracking sound came from just behind them, making the two men spin around to face the source of the noise. Almost at once, they realized there was no need for alarm: an overladen branch had simply given up the ghost and gone crashing to the ground. Of course, that realization did not slow their momentum in the slightest.

Bodie and Doyle went skittering across the ice, their feet scrambling for purchase, their arms wildly flailing, desperately trying to avoid a fall. Instinctively, they grabbed hold of each other, seeking to regain their equilibrium. Unfortunately, gravity won out over preserving dignity and they found themselves lying flat on their backs, staring up at a lacework of ice. Crystals sparkled as they caught the streetlights, and the chittering sound a breeze caused as it passed through frozen branches made it seem as if the trees were sniggering at them both.

“Pretty, isn’t it?” Doyle observed, after a few moments of silent contemplation.

Bodie snorted, and turned his head to face his obviously insane partner. But whatever smart retort he had planned to make died before the words left his lips.

Doyle’s cheeks were flushed pink from the cold. His stupid hat had somehow disappeared – probably it was lumped up under the crazy sod – and a halo of auburn curls spilled out over his twisted scarf. Sleet had capriciously turned back into snow, and thick lashes blinked away melting flakes as Doyle stared into the night sky.

“Beautiful,” Bodie replied.

Something in his tone drew Doyle’s gaze and held it captive.

Something in the air sparked between them. Something that had been quietly building for a long, long time.

“Your place is closer,” Doyle said.

Bodie scrambled awkwardly to his feet. "Come on then, Sunshine. What are you waiting for, Christmas?"

Doyle laughed, and took the hand Bodie offered.

And if they walked a little closer, fingers woven together and shoulders comfortably bumping as they continued on their way, no one was there to see. Only the trees bore witness to their mingled breaths rising above their heads in a heart-shaped cloud. And they kept the secret to themselves.



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Title: Walking in a Winter Wonderland
Author: [livejournal.com profile] melanieathene
Slash or Gen: slash
Archive at ProsLib/Circuit: yes.
Disclaimer: Not mine. They belong to each other.
Notes: My prompt for this challenge was "Trees"
Many thanks to [livejournal.com profile] cali_se for betaing and brit picking.

Date: 2015-12-05 03:28 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] sc-fossil.livejournal.com
Oh, nice! You made me shiver with your description of the cold night, the ice and snow. Then the warmth of the lads going home together. Thanks!

Date: 2015-12-05 03:33 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] etain-antrim.livejournal.com
Aw! Sweetly seasonal.

Date: 2015-12-05 03:39 pm (UTC)
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From: [identity profile] snailbones.livejournal.com


Perfect and gorgeous - thank you so much.

Date: 2015-12-05 05:05 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] dollidaydream.livejournal.com
Love the idea of the lads escaping from the cold and hibernating with good food and good company. Lovely fic. Great first paragraph, really draws you in. Very neatly written. Thank you. :) ETA Meant to say that I love the image of Doyle in a hat.
Edited Date: 2015-12-05 05:12 pm (UTC)

Date: 2015-12-05 06:55 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] macklingirl.livejournal.com
What a nice story! I love the little argument about which flat they will use and the agreement at the end. This story is full of love! Thank you.

Date: 2015-12-05 08:07 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] cloudless-9193.livejournal.com
So atmospheric and comforting and wonderful! :-)

Date: 2015-12-05 08:52 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] msmoat.livejournal.com
Oh, a nice little ficlet. I can just see them crashing down...and discovering each other. Thank you!

Date: 2015-12-05 09:07 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] milomaus.livejournal.com
Oh, that's perfect!

The beauty of ice and snow mingled with love! So heartwarming!!

Thank you!

Date: 2015-12-05 10:14 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] merentha13.livejournal.com
A lovely ficlet! You've beautifully captured the scene as they walk through the winter wonderland. And Doyle's "Your place is closer." is a perfect line and so "lad-like"! Well done.

Date: 2015-12-06 12:03 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] hambelandjemima.livejournal.com
Mmmm, that's lovely :)

Very nice!

Date: 2015-12-06 03:08 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] longstrt.livejournal.com
Loved the descriptions that you used for the freezing, etc. I don't blame Bodie. If I got some looks from Ray Doyle like that, I'd have "fallen" as well. Thanks so much for the ficlet.

Date: 2015-12-06 03:18 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] minori-k.livejournal.com
Awww! What a lovely story! Love it!! Thank you so much!

Date: 2015-12-06 11:09 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] sw33n3y.livejournal.com
What a beautifully atmospheric moment! I especially liked this part: flat on their backs, staring up at a lacework of ice. Crystals sparkled as they caught the streetlights. Lovely!

Thank you! :D

Date: 2015-12-06 01:20 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] ali15son.livejournal.com
i really enjoyed this ...thankyou so much x

Date: 2015-12-06 02:53 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] boothros.livejournal.com
Gorgeous and wonderful. There's just something about the lads at Christmas ...

Date: 2015-12-08 04:47 am (UTC)

Date: 2015-12-13 08:12 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] solosundance.livejournal.com
What a lovely snowy little fic - and I am a sucker for the lads holding hands :)

Date: 2016-01-19 12:01 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] freetraveller15.livejournal.com
A wonderful, atmospheric ficlet. I loved the implied contrast between a cold, wintery night and the promised warmth of an evening (or more) shared together. And that sequence with "pretty", then "beautiful" to refer to very different things was very nice. The closing image too is very uplifting and perfect for the season.
Thank you :)

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