As others have said--a very evocative piece of writing, and a really interesting choice for pov character. You can't help but get caught up in his pain, even as a sense of dread begins to form. That's a nice use of envy! Oh, and I really like the title. *g* Thank you!
![[community profile]](https://www.dreamwidth.org/img/silk/identity/community.png){kind=small}
![[personal profile]](https://www.dreamwidth.org/img/silk/identity/user.png)
timeasmymeasure
no subject
Date: 2007-03-16 02:05 am (UTC)