As everyone's said, this is a lovely, if dark and dangerous piece. I'm always fascinated to see another character's take on the lads, and you've given us a really unique one. I love the narrator's nicknames for them: Pablo and SAS, indeed. And his observations are so spot on.
And you've given us enough that we can feel for the narrator and the loss of his Ronan, even as we see how dangerous he could be to the lads.
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Date: 2007-03-20 02:50 am (UTC)And you've given us enough that we can feel for the narrator and the loss of his Ronan, even as we see how dangerous he could be to the lads.
Brava!