This was lovely. I thought you wove in the bits from Takeaway seamlessly and your take on gluttony was inspired.
One of the things I like best with your writing is the warmth you bring to it. Even when the lads aren't seeing eye to eye, even when one or the other of them is a prat, I still feel for them.
I adored the moment when Doyle realizes Bodie dressed up for him. And his retort to Bodie's teasing, "You snore, sunshine."
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Date: 2007-03-18 05:42 pm (UTC)One of the things I like best with your writing is the warmth you bring to it. Even when the lads aren't seeing eye to eye, even when one or the other of them is a prat, I still feel for them.
I adored the moment when Doyle realizes Bodie dressed up for him. And his retort to Bodie's teasing, "You snore, sunshine."
"You won't notice."
Bloody brilliant. Thanks!