I like this story so much, I know I shall utterly fail to say anything new or intelligent as feedback. All I will say is, each character, from Diane up to Bodie and Doyle, seemed perfectly in character to me and I could see everything unfolding just as you laid it out. The part with Bodie cleaning Ray's weapons was wonderful. This is a marvelous story. This is going into my print it out and save it so I can reread it over and over pile. Thanks for writing it. I don't know the show cmpletely yet since I'm new to the fandom but for my money, you have a perfect grasp of the lads and how they tick.
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Date: 2007-03-25 11:45 pm (UTC)