Perfect pacing to this piece. The gradual unfolding works excellently well. I was wondering if the slightly slow but continual revelation relates to the "sloth" subject. Like you know we are desperate to go faster but you just wont let us break away to the punchline. Very teasing of the author, and it really succeeds. Congrats.
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Date: 2007-04-09 07:18 pm (UTC)